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As I noted in my prior year finalist submission: Contributing to one of humanity's greatest accomplishments—the exploration of our universe and Earth—has been my lifetime dream. Being one of the "small steps for mankind" would be an honor.
Each new discovery about our universe is an opportunity for growth as humans: new scientific understanding of our universe; allowing a deeper consideration of our place in the universe, and in appreciating the fragility of our planet.
Beyond looking outward, aerospace engineering allows us to examine Earth —satellites to monitor our ecology; missions of peace to detect conflict and weapons and other vital services.
We are in an exciting age of aerospace exploration on multiple fronts, and my hope is to make a meaningful contribution to the field, for betterment of humanity.
I have been fortunate to have the support of great parents, teachers, and engineering coaches, and I am grateful to be a student at California Polytechnic. As a sophomore, I have participated in many labs as well as our rocketry club constructing models for flight. In addition, part of my collegiate experience is volunteering as a mentor for my former robotics team. assisting in evaluating designs and providing remote training with CAD.
Getting to this point was not easy—my high school years saw my parents suffer significant health and financial challenges, which continue to this day. My mother faced life-threatening health issues forcing her into medical retirement, while my father lost his job during the 2020 pandemic, never regaining employment. Despite these hardships, my parents encourage me to keep faith and to excel academically, leading me to achieve my goal of attending CalPoly.
As their financial situation deteriorated, in 2024 they made the difficult decision to sell their home and relocate out of state, while taking in my grandmother to conserve funds. Their current ability to support me financially is even more diminished.
Nevertheless, I have been fortunate in many ways, as I am receiving an excellent college education at a great state university. While I do receive federal and state support, including the maximum Pell Grant, these mostly only cover direct educational expenses. Reality is that I must be as self-sufficient as possible by seeking scholarships and grants, as well as through my own earnings.
This academic year, I was fortunate to obtain an on-campus job to help with expenses. Of course, I must maintain a balance between working and study hours to uphold my academic credentials and membership in the Honor Society.
To further my goal of contributing to my own success, I have been actively pursuing summer internship opportunities. While the most important factor will be finding an opportunity that will increase my knowledge and skills, it also will help if it includes a stipend to provide that additional financial support.
I’ve read several articles on the amazing life achievements of Ms. Iris Cummings Critchell. All of us seeking to be in the astronautic and aeronautic fields are in her debt, and this scholarship is an amazing gift to the students she will inspire long into the future.
I am grateful to have been selected last year as a finalist for this scholarship, and would be most honored to be one of your named scholars. The financial support of this and other scholarships is truly a gift of time and advanced opportunities, and would be a deeply appreciated investment in my education and my ability to contribute to aerospace innovation.