The Underlying Meaning of “Be Near Me”
To the naked eye, this is just a beautifully written poem about love and longing in the night. Upon first reading, I concluded that the poem had an underlying theme of the night's emotional effect on the writer and how it amplified the feelings of love and longing, but I felt like there had to be more. The meaning that lies even deeper beneath the surface is based on the author's history of subjects for his poems. He often wrote political poems, and that’s what made me shift my understanding. The underlying meaning of the poem, “Be Near Me,” by Faiz Ahmed Faiz, is that love is the strongest hope in crisis. I concluded this based on the political state of Faiz’s hometown, Siakolt, his personification of the night, and his diction.
To start, in 1987, Faiz published a collection of poems from that year. And with his upbringing into poetry through his father being an elite member of a social literary circle, I suspected there must’ve been something happening in Siakolt during the time of his writing. My suspicions were correct; there was high political turmoil in the region as well as ethnic tensions amongst Mohajirs, Sindhis, Punjabis, and more. Despite his chaotic environment, Faiz's poetry reflects the belief that love serves as a beacon of hope amidst negative external forces. In "Be Near Me," this sentiment suggests that the bonds of affection and connection can provide solace and strength to endure even the most challenging times. His writing reflected this sentiment well through his diction and his personifications.
His personification of the night is notable in his underlying meaning. “It’s blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step,” is talking about the night, yet it seems as though it also describes a political climate that is imprisoning and hard to escape. Another quote, “When having drunk from the gash of sunset, darkness comes,” is representative of the numbness felt from constant conflict and how the strong emotion regarding that conflict follows. These personifications reiterate the feeling of hopelessness and despair with his environment. "When whatever you want to do cannot be done, When nothing is of any use;” near the end expresses his hopelessness toward the state of his country. He follows this up with, “Be with me,” meaning when things outside of your control take over your life and emotions, love is there as comfort and as hope.
His word choice is also notable when understanding his underlying meaning. His use of diction, with words such as “lamentation”, which means the passionate expression of grief or sorrow, represents the political issues he most likely was experiencing in everyday life. Faiz also uses the words “diamond lancets.” A lancet is a blade with a sharp point, and when put together with a diamond, it can be described as glorified or beautiful pain. Typically, conflict is glorified when countries defend or offend other countries. Diamond could also refer to the strength of the pain, given that it’s one of the strongest minerals. With his depiction of the night being painful and emotionally draining for not only himself but also others around him, his source of light is his tormentor and his love.
To conclude, Faiz’s beautiful poem delves deeper than just love and longing but into feelings of despair for his current political climate. This is relatable to a lot of people today who are scared, given conflicts around the world and in their homes. This poem stood out for its timelessness and adaptability to many global situations even today. For me, the depth of love being the source of hope amidst dark times is inspiring and makes me appreciate loved ones who keep me positive even more than before. I hope many more people discover his work and, more specifically, his poem, “Be Near Me.”
BE NEAR ME
by Faiz Ahmed Faiz
“Be near me now,
My tormenter, my love, be near me—
At this hour when night comes down,
When, having drunk from the gash of sunset, darkness comes,
With the balm of musk in its hands, its diamond lancets,
When it comes with cries of lamentation, with laughter with songs;
Its blue-gray anklets of pain clinking with every step.
At this hour when hearts, deep in their hiding places,
Have begun to hope once more, when they start their vigil,
For hands still enfolded in sleeves;
When wine being poured makes the sound of inconsolable children,
who, though you try with all your heart,
cannot be soothed.
When whatever you want to do cannot be done,
When nothing is of any use;
—At this hour when night comes down,
When night comes, dragging its long face, dressed in mourning,
Be with me,
My tormenter, my love, be near me.”
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