
Hobbies and interests
Gaming
Reading
Action
Adventure
Christianity
Fantasy
I read books multiple times per month
Tadiwanashe Motsi Nemhara
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Finalist
Tadiwanashe Motsi Nemhara
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FinalistBio
I am a recent high school graduate with a strong academic foundation and hands-on technical experience, and set to begin my undergraduate journey at Western New England University in the Fall of 2025. I will be pursuing a degree in Business Analytics and Information Management, driven by a passion for data-driven decision-making and entrepreneurial ambition.
With a current GPA of 3.49, I have consistently demonstrated academic dedication while excelling in extracurricular pursuits. I am also a two-time Gold Medalist at the SkillsUSA District Competitions (2023, 2024) and proudly represented my district at the State level in both years - an achievement that reflects my commitment to excellence and technical skill.
In high school, I specialized in auto collision repair through my school’s vocational shop. My plans are to channel my business education and practical experience into launching my own auto collision business after college. My unique blend of analytical knowledge and hands-on trade expertise positions me well to become a future leader in the automotive services industry.
Education
Assabet Valley Regional Technical High School
High SchoolMiscellaneous
Desired degree level:
Master's degree program
Majors of interest:
- Mechanical Engineering
- Business, Management, Marketing, and Related Support Services, Other
Career
Dream career field:
Mechanical or Industrial Engineering
Dream career goals:
Front end bagger, and Cart pusher
Market Basket2022 – Present3 years
Sports
Golf
Junior Varsity2023 – 2023
Awards
- No
Arts
Solo
Musicno2021 – Present
RonranGlee Literary Scholarship
Selected Paragraph
From the Tao Te Ching by Lao Tzu:
“Other people are bright;
I alone am dark.
Other people are sharp;
I alone am dull.
Other people have purpose;
I alone don't know.
I drift like a wave on the ocean,
I blow as aimless as the wind.
I am different from ordinary people.
I drink from the Great Mother's breasts.”
Thesis:
In this passage from the Tao Te Ching, Lao Tzu uses the language of contrast and seeming self-deprecation to challenge the reader’s assumptions about wisdom, individuality, and the value of nonconformity. His underlying message is that true understanding comes not from following the crowd or clinging to certainty, but from embracing humility, openness, and a connection to the deeper source of life.
The Power of Contrasts
Lao Tzu’s words are simple, but they cut deep. He sets himself apart from “other people,” describing them as bright, sharp, and purposeful, while he claims to be dark, dull, and without clear direction. At first, this sounds like he’s putting himself down, but I think he’s actually making a point about how society defines wisdom and success. Most people want to look smart, act with purpose, and fit in with what everyone else is doing. Lao Tzu, on the other hand, is saying that he doesn’t care about those things. He’s not interested in being what the world calls “bright” or “sharp.” Instead, he’s willing to admit that he doesn’t know everything and that he’s different from the crowd.
Embracing Humility
One of the main ideas in this paragraph is humility. Lao Tzu says, “I alone am dull,” and “I alone don’t know.” In our world, people are usually embarrassed to admit they don’t know something. We’re taught to always have an answer, to act confident, and to hide our doubts. But Lao Tzu flips this idea upside down. He suggests that real wisdom comes from admitting our ignorance and being humble. By saying he is “dull” and “without purpose,” he’s not actually saying he’s clueless—he’s saying he’s open to learning, to being surprised, and to letting life unfold without forcing it. This kind of humility is rare, and it takes courage to live this way.
Nonconformity and the Value of Difference
Lao Tzu also talks about being “different from ordinary people.” This line stands out because it shows that he’s not afraid to be an outsider. In school and in life, there’s a lot of pressure to fit in. People want to be accepted, so they copy what everyone else does. But Lao Tzu is comfortable being different. He doesn’t follow the crowd, and he’s okay with not having the same goals or attitudes as everyone else. This is important because it shows that wisdom often means standing apart, thinking for yourself, and not being afraid to look foolish in the eyes of others.
Going with the Flow
The lines “I drift like a wave on the ocean, I blow as aimless as the wind” use images from nature to show a different way of living. Instead of always having a plan or a goal, Lao Tzu is willing to go wherever life takes him. He trusts the natural flow of things, like a wave or the wind. This doesn’t mean he’s lazy or lost—it means he’s not obsessed with control. In today’s world, we’re told to set goals, make plans, and work hard to achieve them. But Lao Tzu is saying that sometimes it’s better to let go, to trust the process, and to see where life leads. This attitude takes faith and patience, but it can lead to a deeper sense of peace.
Connection to the “Great Mother”
The last line, “I drink from the Great Mother’s breasts,” is a powerful image. The “Great Mother” stands for the source of all life—the Tao, or the natural order of the universe. By saying he drinks from her, Lao Tzu is saying that he gets his strength and wisdom not from society, but from something deeper and more universal. He’s connected to the source, and that’s why he doesn’t need to be “bright” or “sharp” like everyone else. He’s nourished by something greater, and that gives him a quiet confidence.
Conclusion
Lao Tzu’s paragraph is more than just a confession of feeling lost or different. It’s a challenge to the way most people think about wisdom and success. He’s telling us that it’s okay to not know, to be humble, to stand apart, and to trust the flow of life. Real wisdom, he suggests, comes from being open, honest, and connected to the deeper rhythms of the world, not from showing off or following the crowd. In a world that values certainty and conformity, Lao Tzu’s message is a reminder that sometimes, the wisest thing we can do is admit we don’t have all the answers, and that’s perfectly okay.