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Alyssa Luoma

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Bio

Ever since middle school I've loved to write. The subject has always been captivating to me and has kept me occupied for hours at a time. In the future, my goal is to pursue a career in writing where I make a steady income doing what makes me happiest. I'm hoping to attend Colorado Mesa University and continue my studies to help prepare me for my career goals. College is a big investment, so I'm dedicated to getting all the financial help I can get in order to pursue my dream.

Education

Grand Junction High School

High School
2019 - 2023

Miscellaneous

  • Desired degree level:

    Bachelor's degree program

  • Majors of interest:

    • Rhetoric and Composition/Writing Studies
  • Not planning to go to medical school
  • Career

    • Dream career field:

      Writing and Editing

    • Dream career goals:

    • Cleaner (sweeping, vacuuming, wiping down surfaces, etc.)

      No organization, work for friends and family.
      2016 – Present8 years
    • Babysitter (watching, feeding, and taking care of children of all ages while keeping them happy and entertained).

      No organization, worked for friends, family, and neighbors.
      2018 – Present6 years

    Sports

    Cheerleading

    Junior Varsity
    2016 – 20204 years

    Public services

    • Volunteering

      Grand Junction Community Homeless — Making, preparing, and serving food
      2015 – 2017

    Future Interests

    Advocacy

    Volunteering

    Entrepreneurship

    @frankadvice National Scholarship Month TikTok Scholarship
    @Carle100 National Scholarship Month Scholarship
    Alicea Sperstad Rural Writer Scholarship
    Bright light shines onto my face as I hover over my Chromebook. I look to the bottom right corner, realizing it’s 4:00 am. One more paragraph, I tell myself. My fingers dance across the keyboard, attempting to get every last word down. The sound of my typing is covered by footsteps approaching my room. I quickly slam the device shut, jumping under the covers with my eyes closed as if I had been asleep. “It's time for bed!” my dad yells as my door swings open. “You can write tomorrow. You need sleep,” he tells me, leaving with my laptop. Will Mr. Roenicke like my paper? I wonder, thinking about the changes I could make. I hear the obnoxious sound of my alarm clock blaring, telling me it's 6:00 am. I jump out of bed, excited to go to school and write. Growing up I made an enemy of writing and dreaded school just because of the time we spent learning to write. I was never talented in the area, so I lacked motivation. My dad, being the stickler he is, forced me to do my English homework despite my dramatic outbursts and refusal. The intimidation I encountered with this subject was my biggest obstacle throughout elementary school. I felt out of place because my mom was such a creative writer. The task always came to her naturally. She wrote with ease and found passion in doing so. We were very similar, so I wondered why I wasn’t the writer she was. For years I beat myself up about it, thinking I just wasn't capable of this form of expression that came naturally to everyone around me. That was until I was put into Mr. Roenicke’s English class and finally began to learn. It was 6th grade when I was suddenly taught differently than I had ever been before, allowing me to enjoy the subject and excel. I was nervous when entering the class because of my bias against writing, but Mr. Roenicke found a way to connect with each student on a personal level and help them individually in the way best fit for them. He made class fun, while still keeping students engaged and teaching. Despite the little faith I had in myself, Mr. Roenicke motivated me to learn. As silly of a reason as it is to finally become inspired to write, I wanted to be recognized for my accomplishments and make my teacher proud. As I started to write more, I realized I loved it. I was so captivated by the hobby and could spend hours just writing. It was such a sudden change that my family wondered what happened. Instead of dreading the subject and looking at writing as something I had to do, I began using it as a personal outlet. Throughout the year, Mr. Roenicke helped me become the writer I never thought I could be, and since then I´ve grown to love the subject more and more. He helped me grow as a learner, find a therapeutic way to express myself, inspired me to take more advanced writing classes, and even solidified my idea to go to school and study something that means the world to me. Without Mr. Roenicke, I wouldn’t have found enjoyment in the thing I’m most passionate about. I wouldn’t have the confidence in myself to write this essay, and I wouldn’t know what to write about. Without the impact Mr. Roenicke made on me I wouldn’t be the student, person, or writer I am today, and I wouldn’t have anyone to thank for helping me find me.